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Monday 26 June 2017

Snowman War

Snowman WarImage result for Evil snowman
WALT: We Are Learning To
Make a winter poem with strong verbs.
In the bed like most is where I lie.
The window catches my brown eyes.
I instantly get out of bed.
The closet now is where I head.
Image result for pile of snowballsI dive into the white, white land
The place that can’t be made by man.
I make a man made out of snow.
With stones as eyes and carrot nose.
I’m throwing balls made out of ice.
At snowmen because they’re not nice.
And now I’m hiding in a fort.
Because there’s one thing that I’ve been taught.
These snowmen don’t fully agree.
And know they’re coming after me.
But I’m going to make a stand.
I will defend my white, white land.
I collect a pile of frozen balls.
Image result for evil snowmanBefore they charge into the malls.
So I hop onto my old trike.
(My Dad never got me a bike).
I throw the balls. I win the war.
               Not sure I like snowmen anymore!

          (actually I’m quite sure I don’t like them)

4 comments:

  1. I have read it over and over because it is so funny and cool.

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  2. Thanks. That is very kind of you Jayden. But I think I got a little carried away.

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  3. Hi Zach,

    This story is cool. (Get it? Because your story was... ah never mind) It's funny and I really like funny stories.

    This reminds me of a snowman I made when I was 3, when I lived in Athurs Pass. It wasn't as scary as your snowman army though. This also reminds me of a book called 'Emily Windsnap and the midnight sun. It's about a girl called Emily who is half mermaid and half human. She was sent to do a mission with Aaron to stop Neptune's evil twin.

    What inspired you to make this story?

    From Mika

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  4. Hi zach i like your snowman story it looks really scary keep it up zach

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