Walt:Write a wether poem using strong verbs
Tiny frozen meteors
Drumming drumming
Hard then light.
The sudden sound is no delight.
The thumping beat as hail pores.
You wish that it was under laws.
It’s hard to see, easy to hear.
You know it’s wise to be aware.
It’s not like summer autumn spring.
Down from the skies there bulleting.
You see them jumping of the floors.
These tiny frozen meteors.
Great use of rhyming and imagery in your poem Zach. I actually like to listen to hail myself. Good to see that you have thought about what happens when it hails.
ReplyDeleteThanks for the comment mum.
Deletenice rhyming Zach i like your poem
ReplyDeleteWell done Zach, the words you used really painted a brilliant picture in my head. I almost felt the cold feel of the hail on my skin. When writing poetry make sure you get the right word when using the spell check as pores is the skin pore. I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mark,that's kind of you
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