The Depths
AS I lung into the water I hold my breath, but soon open my
eyes to the world of wonder that is the pacific. I sink deeper
and deeper into the the world of grace and kaos that is growing
around me. The water is buzzing with activity of all kinds.
I spot a reef and swim a fraction closer. My dad warned me
not to touch them as they are Extremely Fragile. I turn onto
my back and close my eyes , It feels like I am an astronaut
floating through space. I open my eyes to see the most
wounderus thing. A giant jellyfish, a meter long at least. It
seems to be glowing in the dark sea. My Dad tries to call me
up to the surface but curiosity gets the best of me and I follow
the Jelle deeper Into the murky water. I only realise how deep
I am when I start to run out of Oxygen. I look up only to see
that I could never make it back. I see A small cave not far off
and hope that there is a air bubble. If not I’ll be toast. I swim
as fast as I can and It’s my lucky day, An air bubble. I climb in
to see another man already there. He charges at me with a
sharp piece of coral. And it is only then, that I wake up.
eyes to the world of wonder that is the pacific. I sink deeper
and deeper into the the world of grace and kaos that is growing
around me. The water is buzzing with activity of all kinds.
I spot a reef and swim a fraction closer. My dad warned me
not to touch them as they are Extremely Fragile. I turn onto
my back and close my eyes , It feels like I am an astronaut
floating through space. I open my eyes to see the most
wounderus thing. A giant jellyfish, a meter long at least. It
seems to be glowing in the dark sea. My Dad tries to call me
up to the surface but curiosity gets the best of me and I follow
the Jelle deeper Into the murky water. I only realise how deep
I am when I start to run out of Oxygen. I look up only to see
that I could never make it back. I see A small cave not far off
and hope that there is a air bubble. If not I’ll be toast. I swim
as fast as I can and It’s my lucky day, An air bubble. I climb in
to see another man already there. He charges at me with a
sharp piece of coral. And it is only then, that I wake up.
Sup Zach
ReplyDeleteI love the way you added descripted words in your writing and it flows really nicely. I also like the way you ended in " And it is only then , that iI wake up. Something you can add is to add a picture.
Hi Sanele,
ReplyDeleteI Really Like the Idea of adding a image. I hope you like the jellyfish. it was hard but I managed. Did you know how to add an image?