Walt write a colour poem
Red
Red is the sunset that fills the night sky,
Red are the raspberries that make me feel I can fly.
Red is compassion which means doing good deeds,
Red are strawberries all covered with seeds.
Red is the blood that comes out of my cut,
Red is the inside of a freshly cooked mutt.
I love red because it’s rare.
hi Zach,
ReplyDeleteI really like this poem about the colour red, if you could do this poem again, you could put this sentence in the poem: 'Red is the love I give to my family'.
I have only one question for you, have you done a haiku poem yet?
Jacob M,
at Yaldhurst Model School
Hi zach I really like how you put red photos in.when you put the two first rymes I didn’t notice but I did notice the other ones.maybe next time you could use red font.
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ReplyDeleteAloha Zach,I really liked your DLO about the colour red one thing you need to do is change the picture to a rasberry because the picture that you put in was of a strwaberry. and also make the title more interesting
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